A long journey home – Prologue + Chapter 1
Hello all, this is my first attempt and I hope I’m doing everything correctly. English is not my mother tongue and I owe a big thank you to Valley Cyn Ann for the priceless help she gave me not only...
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The next post will be easier Now you know you can do it. I think there is something here for everyone. Good going
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Yeah I can do it, the challenge is to do it right Thanks Cyn
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You did a very good job. Looking forward to much more. English may not be your mother tongue, but you sure know how to use it to give everyone enjoyment. Thanks, Kay
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Two years? I'd say it isn't right back. I'm glad you're posting your story.
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A new voice. A new POV. A new sensibility straight from the edge of the Tyrrhenian... Thanks for writing, mo4. I know Pappy is happy with it...thought you'd want to know.
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You did good girl, your love shines through in your writing. And I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Please, don't make us wait too long.
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Yes, nice to see a new story. So he's been gone for two years? Heath won't be quite the same Heath he was before, which should be interesting.
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Tauna Petit Strawn wrote:Two years? I'd say it isn't right back. I'm glad you're posting your story.As I said, [selfquote]differently than in the original, he won’t come back so soon[/selfquote] I'm...
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Sweetspur wrote:I know Pappy is happy with it...thought you'd want to know. Of course, and I'm glad to hear that... You bet I'll try my best to never let him down Thanks to you for reading
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Binni wrote:You did good girl, your love shines through in your writing. And I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Please, don't make us wait too long.Now, would I ever do such a thing to you all?...
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Eire Rose wrote:Yes, nice to see a new story. So he's been gone for two years? Heath won't be quite the same Heath he was before, which should be interesting. Indeed, he may not be quite the same......
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Heath seems really confused as to who he is. Is he Charlie's son or Tom's? It's obvious he wants to be Tom's son so badly. I'm really looking forward to Heath's journey to his way back home. Lovely,...
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Wonderful start and anxious to read more.
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Howdy and welcome to the new voice. An intriguing start!
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Wonderful!!! I love that you are taking on this episode and redoing it. I can't wait for more. I loved this ending! So very heartfelt. On to Chapter 2!He missed them, every day. He wanted them,...
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We have a new writter, I'm just starting to read your story and I love it. Bravo Ale!
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I'd have to say that you're off to a great start! I'm looking forward to catching up on the other chapters, and then following along!
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Great start. Now, I know how to work this site without worry of doing something wrong, I am going to start commenting. Now, on to next chapter.
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